Guest
|
IP:
lol, this was bullshit man, these votes are wacked kaos... you better watch whos votin' man...
check it...
kaos - Your punches were there, but only TWO of them made sense, your flow was there and your rhymescheme kept up, but it was newbish, no multis to count, no metas, no name play, nor wordplay, you worked a lil on similies... but they didn't add up right, your creativity lacked alot, and stayed on point... at least some...
Lyrical - You lacked in everything man, you didn't throw one punch that came recognized, it was all flow for you and you didn't even come hard on that, you were too newbish all in all dawg... your flow n rhymscheme followed up well, no sims, metas, multis... blah blah blah... you need to work on it dawg...
kaos - put "explosives" in ur "thoat".. till u 'caughing up bombs'//
"stain ya brain".. from tha 'ink in ur pen'..kill ya "mind".. before u 'think u can win'
those were the only lines that weren't played, even tho the first had been used quiet abit... work on that because that was the only thing that i could point out in ya verse...
vote - Kaos
|