aight, like everyone else said u do have alot of elevatin to do, but that was aight for a first post. work on fittin more vocab and multis in ur verse though. hold ur chin up though and keep postin and ull elevate.

yo can u please return the favor and check out my post?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81167
thanx

peace.....