^^ what sand said

the last line had me like.. umm.. ok
i know how u feel, well kinda... i didnt get her or her sister
the vocab did seem kinda forced but with the rhyme scheme you were doing i see why you needed it... sometimes less is more...
flowed well due to the consistency of rhymes...
good drop

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183