i think the lack of a topic killed it for me
the vocab was there, mulits were lacking...
flow was so-so... im not saying its that bad, just i felt you could have dropped much better

nothing stood out of it that made me take a 2nd look...

if you would be so kind... or hell give me hate feedback... i just want feedback
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183