I was really feelin this, the chorus really hit me. The whole concept was good.

Titan, good content in ya first verse, other then that it was aite.
However i really liked your second verse, it was much cleaner, flowed better, and i felt it was far better then your first.

Realist, solid verse man, flow was on point, and it was clever i was feelin most of it.

nice collab, overall, shit was tight.