hmm...
ok...
while i agree with D.S.
the vocab seemed forced, the flow was half assed

ima start sparkin-them-rounds into-ya-face//
get off the track, u aint have a chance to finish-the-race//

that line while it rhymed was a prime example... didnt say anything special, topic was not applical and thats what i look for, sticking to themes..

you say your a vet, then show me some vet work
p.s. you are better than me by the way

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183