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Ok...explanation..

..If your a herb youll probally take what i'm about to say personal instead of using it in your favor to elevate

encrypted-not a bad verse the concept was there. the punches were so so u need to up them. but i beleive where i lost the enjoyment to your battle was in your structure which ruined your flow..the length of your rhymes would be way past the beat end.... and just wouldnt rhyme. u would have to read ya verse really fast to stay on point with flow and it just ruins everything in there,work on that u have potential...

Hi my name is...i thought u were using some played concepts. set ups and punches were good not great. structure was nice and so was flow...the only reason you took this one i think was because your verse just seemed to hit harder than his
while he was saying a lot u were saying very little but at least yours made sense to me...

no hate i dont know neither of u
just an opinion...

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