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Old 09-24-03, 12:26 PM   #4
RythmicTendicies
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Let me just say 2 things, 1. you have a sick mind, 2. This seemed to go very well with the beat to "Can't Hold Us Down", i was listening to it when rating this..nice.

anway, your flow here was killa, nice internals, and you used a sorta "bar" rhyming scheme here which was nice, see it more in battles, dope.
Your vocab really helped to describe the 'actions' (lol) etc..which your fortuantly (he..he) went into great detail, showed your talent here.

Overall, this was a good piece, it was well structed, with nice bar length, defiently a ncie topic 8/10

Glad to see you back on Rb, we missed you dawg!
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