pretty poetic yeah...
I was feeling it...
a bit basic but thas cool...
I was feeling your flow... some parts flowed better than others though...
and I got respect for your topic here...

"Fertalized egg by one mistake
A foolish game should've never been played
The consequences never to be paid
A life taken by the devil himself
Like a miss placed item on top of a shelf
A helpless embryo with somewhere to go
A path to follow, struggles unknown"

^I had to keep reading after this point... loved your intro girl...
Keep it coming... lol...

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