Pretty good piece my man, i enjoyed the topic, it was pretty original and decently written, one of the best ive seen you do, it could use a couple more ijnternals and multi's to strengthen it slightly, but all in all not a bad piece, it could use a little structure-work to maintain a solid flow, but it wasnt a bad piece.

You have potential. Props.

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