O'Kay O'kay

The rhyme scheme was there throughout...thats a big plus, the flow therefore was dope, vocab was tight throughout...all ill

Basic stuff...blah

My birth was a downfall. . . so now the worlds faced with what it made
Were my faith was slayed in a picture given to me hinting harder days

Dope^^That line had really good imagery and caught me in the moment(trully did)

Don’t take me away, Let me be a glamour child to explain pain
Were my rimes define time trapped between lines of Crazy and sane

That was one of your worse lines...the ineternals seemed to basic but the flow was nice..but could of been bettered

..::Overall::..

Kept on topic with a str8 flow and some great imagery and depth into your topic

...Hit up one of mine...Pz