O'Kay O'Kay

You had a solid rhyme scheme that you can't fault...maybe add some more multis but that wasn't needed...

The vocab fitted in with what you was trying to say but could of been upped...So far practically perfect

But...

The imagery made it more than perfect

dreams of eagles soaring.. their freedom i longed to harness
these walls are harmless.. i use them to guide me through the night

That's dopeness right there^^

Your thoughts we're encripted throughout which will seem dope to any half-decent open mic(ers)..

..::Overall::..

Would like to see more and more content in your next piece

That was good sex on a herb gardens cuz it was dope as fuck!!

Potent has spoken