Hi Sandy
your work is always great. I mean, like, fucking awesome. Because I don't always understand it. And most pieces would suck if I didn't understand. But I don't understand this in such a way, that when I try to understand it, it all becomes relevant to everyday life. Thats why I love your work man.
This had your usual flow, but with a much different style. There isn't the same storytelling aspect that I'm used to seeing in your pieces. It was an ongoing rhyme scheme, so the words continued to interact until the end. Your metaphors were off the hook, where my misunderstanding occurs, and your wordplay is like sex with a virgin.
Quote:
when the alarm clock doesn't ring. . .
that means the knights are asleep,
in a daydream of fake things,
where dehydrated souls unleash
their emotions and weep. . .
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like whoa.