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Everything about this peice was dope, your usage of words, multi's, internals, the flow was a little off at some points but not enough to affect the rest of the verse. I really enjoyed reading this, I kind of felt like the beast that killed was gods minions or something that destroy you then send your soul to heaven. Thats what I made out of it, but this was awesome to read. Keep writing open mic's cus its really suprising to see what people can do when they open up. I have seen battles of yours and there dope so I was just waiting for the time you did an open mic. . .
Good Work!
Im Out . .
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