Thread: A.I Presents : All Of This Is Circumstance
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Old 09-24-03, 10:49 PM   #2
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not bad, i was feelin that..good flow on some part...word play was okie..i think you could of read it over an tryed to re-word something to make it sound more in depth, but good piece..check my hypothisis keystyle out 1
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