all lyrics are poetry...all lyrics are poetry...
you would get more feedback if you replied
to more people...noones gonna look at shit
if you dont reply to theirs with more than
one sentence replies...this isnt just for you
its for evertone in this damn forum....

as for you poem...open mic would tell you to post
it here instead and those that would reply would
say 'nice shit ma..keep flowin' how does that make
anyone better that wants constructive criticism...

"gotta lotta love..not enough friends" Slug

trust is there theres just a select few that are trustworthy
individuals on earth as it is..im from mars..your poem
was depressing like necro said and his critiques
make everything flow and sound better...

reply to more people and you'll get more replies