very nice. The flow was perfect and it kept me in suspence. I like how you use metaphors to explain. People can say there going to do something but i means jack squat until you do it. Actions speak much louder than words. Again wit much respect. peace


Not to be annoyin or anything in that sense. Any women out there I would like you to read "A Woman". I would like to see how you feel and your reactions to it. Need replys well i can expand to a greater peice. Thank you very much