nice emotional piece, i liked it a lot,

i liked this bit in particular
And your life is like virginity, you only have it once
But for me it’s like a joke that will never have a punch
Because it’s not funny, it’s not supposed to be
This is reality, your not invincible; you could be the next fatality
You have no morality, that is what I been told
But now I'm all alone, and I found that this earth is cold

you should join the omens, we got wordperfect and king of thieves too, its a mostly open mic crew