wow this was alot longer than i thought it would be
so much on legos?

ok the flow was one of the best iv seen reading this was actually fun and i was waiting to see who you would rhyme each word or your choice of what to say.

the vocabulary was 9/10 i felt you could have used 1 or 2 more here or there, and like 1 in the whole thing seemed forced

I care a lot for my Surroundings, yet this Mountain of mounting depression,
Seems to Be, Bleeding the Scenery, leaving imagery Doubting my questions

the use of mountain-mounting ruined it for me, either than that it was 9/10 for vocab

this was a great drop and im taking notes

if you would be so kind (sorry its alot,can u hit one up at least)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81616
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183