^^ Aite shit
No personals...cuda been a prewrite..
just a bunch of wak punches wasnt feelin the outro too much intro was coo
Good shit for a newb no doubt u prolly gunna take this But u fukin suk kid
elevate use sum personals throw summulties in there
dont rite like a paragraph an just have the last words rhymin ..thats why your a newb
Have you parting with a broken spine’and lost respect, leaving with no-back//
you sum fake ass dealer with a plumber is the only time he can show-crack //
^^ best line u had
only lines that had potentiol to win
the rest looked like weak jabs original yea but weak..soft...
ill vote when other kids drops..

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