You did a real nice job writing this. As I was reading it I didn't expect the end to be like that, with the guy hitting the girl. You never let on to that kinda thing earlier in the writing so I thought that little twist was good. I liked the message you had in it. That sons take after fathers and don't really know that sort of thing is wrong. I still think fuckers that do it are stupid but it's a different view this piece showed me. Nicely written.