was an alright read man. everything was on track but if I know u as well as I do I think u could do better. but other then that it was a good read. but to break it down ur wordplay lacked a bit but flow was nice, multi's coulda been a bit better (vocabulary wise) and ur vocab was kinda lacking to but u had a good rhyme scheme so keep it up bro. peace.

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