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Old 09-25-03, 03:58 PM   #10
Kredit
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You're mumbling a lot, try to speak clearer and annunciate. .
From what I can tell, flow is decent for the most part, off at times, but overall good.
Delivery and emotion could both use some work, but both will come when you become more comfortable on the mic. .
Can't really comment on the lyrics, because I couldn't really hear any. .
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