Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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its pretty sad that this got slept on before, coz this is a good piece.
in it i found some great vocab and a great flow, i too agree that in some spots it should be re-worded so that it sounds better, not so it rymes
although alot of pieces in here a dark and depressing ( this isnt a very happy place) yours is one of the darkest yet, and in a way its good, because it got out so much emotion, so much feeling.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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