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Old 09-25-03, 04:45 PM   #8
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From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin
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iight

its pretty sad that this got slept on before, coz this is a good piece.

in it i found some great vocab and a great flow, i too agree that in some spots it should be re-worded so that it sounds better, not so it rymes

although alot of pieces in here a dark and depressing ( this isnt a very happy place) yours is one of the darkest yet, and in a way its good, because it got out so much emotion, so much feeling.

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