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Old 09-25-03, 04:55 PM   #4
Dez
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ive witnessed mass elevation from you in the short time that ive known you..i remember when you had NO flow whatsoever..and now, upon reading your recent works, ive come to see flashes of magnificience. this flowed beautifully, never lacked content & was superior to most of the current open mics. however, at some points it seemed as if you were rhyming words just to rhyme them..it was as if they lacked meaning..but, despite its few fallacies, this was overall an enjoyable read.
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