"A Sour Fate Followed Suit Tomorrow’s Youth drew from the Zinc Prisms,
Now Creating Visual Blizzards. . its the Blink and you’ll Miss It Ink Wizard." haha dopeness
liked that line, madd abstractivity, the starting was quite gripping,
like brough the reader into the piece well

"But in his Family Tree, he’s now Carved a Masterpiece of Crafted Speech." ohhh doperness
" Painted Picture.
This tainted fixtures " oh the man with the multies and the wordplay
"What I Write gives The reader Goosebumps.
Center of a Media Zeus Hunt to Steal My Thunder with intellectual patients" liar i dont feel no goosebumps?!?!?*greatly disapointed*
"& now Fakes Sneer at the Way Cam's like Shakespeare with A Spray Can." i was feelin that, so u express ur feelings on a wall now
"Pleedin`, & Revenge is Sweeter than the Sugar Coated lies you Hide Behind." nice ender for the first verse,
this flowed good, liked you multies and wordplay, quite imaginative,
and creative i would have to say, content was about 8/10, deepness
is what i found in your shit, ur rhyme scheme was quite the dope,
and ur concept was quite the alrite, umm liked your style,
like u didnt go line for line, rather u just wrote, doperdoperness
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"Welcome to the Block. .
. .of No Emotion, and False Expression as The Wind Blows,
where The Path To Success is actually a Yellow Brick Road
The townsfolk are out of reach, never speak, bicker or kiss,
just go about their Buisness in an inch high of Ignorant Bliss.
Its sinking in, & drowned in despression, pen holds my sight
This is torture, maybe i should just give up, and Lego of Life. ."
bah onyl 1 problem with that, i read a piece yesterday, that said
yellow brick road, and i commented on thier dopeness of them words
i liked that ignorant bliss line, man that was a dope chorus,
kinda catchy but u'll never hear me recite it lol, na it was goood,
bah i dunno i'm no shiznit, umm creativity imaginary was dope
"This is torture, maybe i should just give up, and Lego of Life."
shouldnt that say let go of life.............................................. .....

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"Its Sink or Swim . . you either Think to Win or Drown in the Waves Present of your Saviours Pen, " fucck
opener was killin, much better when ur first verse's opener,
this was quite gripping

"Ladies and Gents. were your Lives Meant to be Bent across? All love is lost," gotta love that abstractness man, fuck a line for line scheme

"Lonely, & made to feel like the Scum of the Earth on the Scum that is Earth." haha that is dope, really liked that

"Red White and Blue caught in My Eyes," damn country lovers

"Eyes Glazed and Abstract, the White Hope holdin a Kaleidoscope Joint show,
A man of the Digital Age, maybe i should log off and install 'Life: Version 2.0'" probably ur 2 best lines of the whole shit, man
that was deep, abtract as hell, doperdoperdopernessisisty

loved ur 2nd verse, tis was better then ur first, creativity hits the roof
and imaginary hits the penthouse lol, na i really liked that Version 2.0 line
hmm we should do a collab, fool, i'll quote u then fool, ok fool
umm reall this was dope, the topic was nice, the concept was nicer
and ur style was nicest, abtract as hell, just the way i liked it,
well u have elivated my man, but hey its not my fault that i AIMed to be iller than yall............LOL

bah reply to mine u slob...even though i havent dropped it yet