Save the grammatical critique - this piece doesn't warrant nor deserve it. A somber reminder, Bruk - a somber reminder, indeed - of the wonder(s) of life. A poetically-inclined piece, obviously, you ought to post in Poetic Sciptures, too. It would be inappropriate and distasteful to label this event as inspiration, but in a way, I think your writing will shine with a new luster down the road.

Don't sweat it, doggy. But, don't forget it, either. Good luck in coping -

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