Dopeness Bruk,
ive never seen a piece of yours with such in-depth emotion as you showed here, she obviously meant a lot to you or you felt strongly about her. As G.hod said - its not the grammatical structure thats importnant in this, the fact alone that it came from the heart and means a lot to you makes this doper than ANYTHING i could tell you right now. A great piece my man, nicely dedicated.

R.I.P

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