i liked this very much
the flow was off at times but still not too bad
the vocab was greatly used... a sprinkle here and there did good
the topic was understandable by the comman person which is good

overall great job

if you would be so kind (all being slept on... please choose at least 1)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81616
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665