just for looks you should post the lines under each other

verse was good... flow was on point, mulits lacked... i like mulits... vocab was rather simple but the the flow saved it

good job and elevation is in your future

if you would be so kind (slept on)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81616
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665