^^what they said

this was def good to read
the flow made it easy to follow along and the rhyme scheme was very enjoyable

vocab was well placed

overall good job

if you would be so kind (slept on)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81616