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Originally posted by WORD~PERFECT
indeed this poetic stanza depicting inner tormoil and it was beautifully done....it was a short peace which dispointed me but you got the point across beautifully
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beautifully put..it was a little too short for my tastes...if you condense it is is like what? roughly 4 bars? with the exception of that, this was a good read...
but the length leaves little to critique.