What Do We Need? Necessity Is The Mother Of Invention
Jesus Confessed To Me, But I Wasn't Paying Attention

Pulling A Frown, Out From My Dresser Drawer Full Of Smiles
As My Plastic Family Scatters Broken Across The Floor Tiles




^wonderful lines..the highlights of this piece..


there was soom extraordinary multis as well as metas in here, at several points i found myself so eager to see the next line that id skip a few..

the only i problem that i saw with this was the sceme.. i.e.


So Choose It With Care, And Stare At The Moutains I Burnt
And The Lessons I Learned


the short time span that it takes to reset your eyes on the next line throws off the whole flow of the piece...


or maybe im just dumb.