I liked this piece...the multi'z and flow were good...althoough it seemz as if some multi'z were a lil' forced...but they would still sound good in audio...there wasn't really a story behind the rhyme...you was just basically spittin' whatever...but it's all good...sometimez I do that too...but for future reference...try to think of a concept that you wanna stick to before you rhyme and it will help you elevate a lot...like for example...you see all of my open mics...they are all keystylez...but it doezn't really look like it cause I picked a topic and stayed with it...but this was a nice drop for just a bragging rights type rhyme...