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Old 09-26-03, 07:28 AM   #12
Ha'aNe
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very nice piece JT, it kinda brought me 2 tears :\

i love the vibe this poem has, the concept is much needed, im really glad u wrote this, it has amazin insight.. mayb now guys can see that females r more then wha they preceive

the flow is nice as fuck, i love the whole poem, the structure works well, its very well written, the description of how a women truly is.. is really lovely, great poem.. killin message, im really feelin the emotion uve displayed also
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