Condensed Air, I breathe heavily not knowing about the journy I sought.
The Sweat slowly oozes from my glands, I can't stand to think, I'm burning my thoughts.
My head aching in confusion, Abusing myself as the branches claw at my Epidermus.
As the breaze slowly murmers the rumors, And me without my thermus..
My blood pulsating at 100 miles per hour, as I think of the gore
"Scattering around lost in the middle of no where, I'm trying to find somewhere to go." liked that
"But now I grasp that i'm dyin, and it's internal. " liked that
"Mind submerges deep into subconsiousness, Lost within the thoughts That race through my mind." bah mind mind........
"day.
Awaking shortly after, break my subconscious ways and start off without delay...
Breaking off for the new day" day day???
bah i really liked yourstyle pure orginality, but i dunno ur flow
was kinda off, and umm well i didnt like it when u used the same word rhyming
in like 2 lines, yea this was alrite a bit simple, i thought u were like 1 of the best?
obviously not 1 of ur better works, u can do better i know that, so stop brining
urself down, umm i dunno this was alrite, but i was exceptin way more from
the legendary Knight Shade

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