View Single Post
Old 09-26-03, 02:44 PM   #5
pot1ent
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP:

O'key Dokey...

This was ill...may not of been structured the best but the flow was still good...

The content of the lines were unbeliavably dope...seriouosly

is this the end of the beginning..or the beginning of the end?

dope reversal^^


its ok to cry inside.. but dont ever let the outside see a tear

science to the fullest...keeping on topic...


i want to SCREAM AND YELL..Dear God, Why cant i see the light?!?!
ive come to realize that it isnt too dim..i cant see it because i choose to be blind

finisher was like WAOH^^

This really was as dope as any others...i forgot the minor faults like rhyming by the content and shrewness of this piece

Your now the scientist..lol...You killed this one

Props!!
  Reply With Quote