Sharp Perfection.
From: HELL!!....and yet you think im jokin |
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wow, this was one of your shorter poems ive read, but close to the most emotion ive ever gotten from them. i think alot of ppl can relate to this in there own way, me being one. you just paint such a beautiful picture with your words its mind blowing sometimes.
If I were to close my eyes and open them only to see the same damn thing
Would there be any justification in my going to sleep merely to dream?
you caught my attention with the very first lines, i loved the beginning it drew me into it, and made me want to read it again.
~Tera~
DONT HATE
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R.I.P to my lost girl
~ Nyla ~
keep singing in heaven
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