iight

i liked this lots! it came across loud and clear, the whole message was layed out before me, and i felt like i could reach out and feel your emotions.

i can't believe i was so blind so dumb so utterly inane
to think you could change and be the woman i'd respect
someone i could love and trust what more should i expect
from the day we met i was sure we could connect
beset on all sides by warnings both near far and up above
thought we could overcome anything as long as we had love

this part was the part i loved the most, because its something i use to think to myself, that even thou we may not connect now, im sure we will fall in love soon.

it was a good read, had a great flow, and vocab that fitted it

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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