you are bitter that cam caught you biting
this is a very well written piece, your style has gotten much better, and I appreciated the abstractness.
The section where you added all the pieces of the world I found particulary brilliant because it showed us your adding skills.
I enjoyed the entire piece.
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Breath i'll be exaushated, nausious precaucious about that rawkus,
Without a reason for breathing, and bleveing if the breif bleeding,
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like whoa.