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Old 09-26-03, 07:36 PM   #2
DaGyrlRemarqabL
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OMG. Hazy baby, this piece was absolutely ADORABLE. One of the best things I've read on here in a long time, seriously! So simple, yet so full of meaning and wisdom. I loved it entirely. Every single line, great imagery, nice title and extraordinary message.
My favorite parts were:

>When you ask How are you?

Do you hear the reply?

>Ever told your child,

We'll do it tomorrow?

And in your haste,

Not see his sorrow?

Beautiful, Mama. Great to have you back on the boards.....hope you stick around for a while...

Luv, GeGe*
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