You kno your still as sick as I remember along time ago you wrote a piece about a disease…I don’t remember the specifics and I was wondering if you still have it cuz id love to re read it…as for this one well;;;;;;;;;

Your style has changed in my op (last piece I read was over a year ago lol) My posse's full of helots, zealots and those in love
Much to my dismay, I'm none of the above

Seems you’ve picked up more of an edge and you’ve got more VIBE instead of blood and gore

You still have it however its just presented differently the piece wa long but easy to read and was a great story…I followed and actually felt the emotions you wanted the reader to feel …was excellent