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Old 09-26-03, 07:58 PM   #3
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Ok Folks here's a breakdown

Roux
this filthy brat will end up flat on his back, this newbie is wack, frontin like a vet makes me laugh//
bitch i never grip a gat, but i stack verbs phat and squash herbs flat(splat)-

^^multi's seem real forced....no punch here really, not hard-hitting at least.

oscillated my verse to ensure i cursed all of your words and burned out a third of your third world nerves//
flipin these hot words like birds i'm sure your bitch has curves like WHOA big like the curvature of the earth-2

^^ok multis.....gotta combine them with punches though.

Filthy is how you look when i leave you beat down in the gutter, soft beaten like butter, beat your ass with a putter//
and a nine iron till all you could do was just sputter, eyeballs all a flutter an you manage to stutter your wack verse with a mutter-3

^^forced multis....

The only throne you from is the shitter, just a third rate quitter i don't mean to sound bitter//
in prison you're known as a "tight pipe fitter" butt fucked like your sister popped your ass like a blister met your mom she's a "two fister"-4

^^ok punch...ok multis


mr. filthy it's your turn to spit, but you just aint shit, you useless like an old nun's tit//
throw a fit i bet your rhymes pre writ, your writs need to get slit , beat your ass so hard you got nowhere to sit-5

^^ok....good flow...but bad punches

Overall-you had multis, actually your whole verse was based on multis, which dont mean shit if you cant sombine them with solid punches.3/10

Filthy
This 'Fool-Is-A-Mess' So Im A "NewB"?... Nah This Kids Gettin Abused-By-A-Vet
Ya Crew-Is-Tha-Best??, That Cant Be "Correct" Coz Like A "Blunt ScrewDriver" Its Clear You Aint The Sharpest 'Tool-In-The-Chest'!!!!/...1

^^oh shit....nice opener man...

Impale Ya 'Chest-With-Knives!!' "Get Girls??"... Nah This Kid Preferrs To 'Mess-With-Guys!!'
Im 'Fresh-With-Vibes' Im Simalar To "Tite Specticals" The Way I 'Press-Your-Eyes'!!!!/

^^nice punch...ok multis


Filthy Known To 'Despise-And-Beat-ya!'.. Its Like "Drawin With Poisonous Rulers" The Way My 'Lines-Deplete-ya!!'
I Make Ya 'Alliance-Weaker' You Should Call Me A "Deranged School Kid" For "Battlin" This 'Science-Teacher!!!'/...3

^^lol nice personal

Ma Solid Punches Known To 'Smack-Ya-Face' Like "Fightin With Garbage" The Way I 'Attack-This-Waste!!',
This Kid Already "Knows Hes Lost"... He 'Lacks-The-Faith!!'... Audio's?? Nah, Your "Name Definition's" The Only Time Ya 'Phat-With-Base!!!'/...4

^^DAMN!!!! nice fuckin line man tight personal

'Slit-Heads'... Filthy Known To 'Stick-Lead' In Ya 'Dick-Head!!'
'Rip-And-Shred' Vomiting On Cotton Reals The Only Time This Coward Has A Sick-Thread!!!

^^lmao nice finisher.

Overall-real nice verse......tight man nice shit......all i can say....9.5/10

Filth beat roux easily, this was one sided as hell...

Both of ya gotta work on your structure though, and numbering your bars is very herbish.

Vote=Filthy