Sorry to ha'nae on behalf of us all. It was a mistake. It isn't always like this. Not at all...

Onto the piece..

It was all quite predictable. But in a good way. It was fairly blunt in what it was saying. You tried to get behind the whole thing. The mindset, the emotions...the struggle. And you did it quite well. the flow was good. I was able to read it without stopping much. You didn't rely on rhyming or a set structure as such. Which i felt helped the piece a lot.

The ending was relatively tame. But in another sense, it was good.

...resp....