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C_DRAMA ASSOCIATED HIS RHYME WITH GANGSTA REALITY ON THE NET. . .THAT WAS HIS 1ST FLAW
2ND WAS HIS OPENER COMPLETELY ELUDED ME. . .CRACKED TOE??
YOU HAD ABSOLUTE BAD STRUCTURE & WORDPLAY WAS UNUNDERSTANDABLE
ROYAL HAD BETTER STRUCTURE BY JUST LOOKING AT IT, BETTER WORDPLAY & FLOW WAS NEARLY PERFECT
AS FAR AS I SEEN HE TOOK THIS BECAUSE OF HIS WORDPLAY
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