hmm this had a good topic and the effort you put in can easliy be seen

it was nice how you put yourself in the situation and the endind had me scrolling down to find the rest...

flow was off but in the story mode it doesnt matter too much
the story was good... great drop kid
let me know when part 2 is up

if you would be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81665