this is how i see it...styles were kinda whack
i don't like the quotes dragon
n i don't like the stretched lines either

dragon's verse tho was ight... kinda personal n hit well
syn here... started off really strong... hittin hard like whoa...kinda
then like afta line 5 or so... it became really whack... like whoa
that aaaaaaawwwwww shit n so on didn't float...
well it was close... but ya i think dragon has got it...
both could improve some n all.