"These filthy dreams are seen in taboo magazines that I recommend" haha dope
"I once said to her, this class actioned law ‘suit’ doesn’t do you justice" doin "this" is not necesary
"Its my sense of humor she adores yet all I see her striptease me like Demi Moore" dope/clever

nice verse, flow was on point, ur lines
were a bit too long, but hey u had an
orginal style/approach to this, liked the
content, nice, and orignal, like most cats
usually go for the same bullshit, but u
kept it nice and orignal, nice flow with the
multies, really liked that.............................


"In the end, I know some things just weren't meant to be like they happened
I guess I was just confused, and didn't know how to react, to everyones actions" dope opner, gripping
"I sent you my love, but in return,…nothing from you was sent-to-me" bah would sound better if u re worded it, and this-isnt-necesary
"Everythings crashing, to much action, no time to react cause I have hate with a passion
My feelings took a bashen, while hate and love went clashen, and my heart took all the slashen" liked the multies
"All this time you was with my boy, you just played me as toy, I guess this is how it ends" nice ender


u 2 complimented each other's styles,
umm Masta C ur flow was dope in some
points, just keep coming with more multies
wordplay to make this intersting, liked your
style, but it woudl be better if u 2 tried to
match ur styles for this,...........................

over all

nice content, nice flow, good concept
good approach with a lot of originality
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