Dont feel sad , it takes time before u recieve a feedback..........Anyways this piece was decent........Ur opening line was sick...Uh,these sacred scriptures
Remain playin' in your brain like Holocaust pictures
^^^^Tight as hell dawg............You had decent wordplay , your structure was nice , Some of your lines were creative......But you really lacked Vocabulary.........U need to elevate on that.......
Im Bringin' the heat from beneath ya
I guess that oughta teach ya
^^^Weak , I wasnt feeling that........I wasnt feeling the "ya" at the end...............The first line was tight , but the second line was kinda herbish......................Overall this was a tight piece...........And overall I give you a 7/10........