IP:
O'kay O'kay
Bash said it straight...but also
...This was REALLY short...maybe to short too crit...I think some lines were like BLAH and i woulda made like 4 lines outta them
But i think you had some nice rhymes in this piece...Talking about 'advance vocab for your age'...How old are you...Just out of curiousity...
Pz
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